Here I am necro-ing this just to tell you how much fun I had with the first part of the story! 
But I just want to congratulate FBG on how they add references to their stories! In this one there’s a mention of “Lord P______'s famous diamond newt” from January Exceptional Story: A Newt By Any Other Name! They told of a character they used in another ES 4 years later! I love it!
EDIT: Well, I finished the story and I can say I enjoyed all of it! One of the most beautiful I’ve played and the ending was GREAT! Everyone was happy and only the Devils were tricked!