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Rastannar von Kryer
Rastannar von Kryer
Posts: 2

11/25/2015
  • [A window into growing madness and obsession, Perhaps not a truly 'terrible' story for most, but if you are sensitive, just a slight warning. Meant to entertain or bring up questions, or possible In character quotes if you want to poke into this, Hope you enjoy this.]


  • "Tired... so tired, but not, cannot sleep. The cats, they stare, they hiss when he looks upon them. They know things, saw what I saw, sure of this. The Zee, something is not right, I cross your dark tides, see what others do not. My brother has been gone, he went searching, searching for... for... I don't know anymore, it's not my brother, he is cold, but grinning. I see the eyes, they're gone, the zee must have them, less sleep does not... So tired, my mind grows weary. My dreams are haunted, I hear things, see demise... madness, it feels like madness, must be madness, another glass of Wine wont hurt, no my insides hurt, it must be the wine, has to be, maybe Mister Wines can make a mistake, yes, yes... no, no, I do not remember his mistakes, or is he hiding things... no, bad thoughts, bad... the Masters are not... they are... what are they again? I thought I knew, felt I knew, knew I knew... weren't there more? I heard once there were more, do they take vacation? Another glass... maybe I wont dream this night, should write to Merle, she's sweet, help me sleep better. Must finish- Wait, someone's at my door, Who's there!?"


  • [P.S. Not a good writer, but wanted to put down something on a Forum I felt like peopled say 'Hmm, it's ok, but..' about, or enjoy if it is any good or people feel like seeing more, I'll add on or add more detailed animations for imagery over 'fill in your imagination' entirely.]

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    Cats, cats see... they know things, interesting things...
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    Pyrodinium
    Pyrodinium
    Posts: 639

    11/25/2015
    It's a good prologue smile I want to see how the story unfolds.
    Besides your character seems to have:

    Having Recurring Dreams: Is Someone There? is increasing…

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    (A Monster hunter on the hunt of his twin brother's killer. Overprotective dad of his twin's daughter)
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    (an indeterminate person of potentially rubbery lineage)
    * All social actions except photographers and loitering welcome!
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