What the community and third parties are building in StoryNexus
Playtesting: This Rising Darkness.
ArianeEmory
Posts: 21
1/12/2013
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Okay. Fool me twice, shame on me: I've inadvertently let This Rising Darkness go live. *coughs*
This is not such a bad thing: I'm so completely unsure of what people will make of this one that I'd be very, very happy to receive some feedback about it. So I'm leaving it live and InProgress, and I've marked it several times as being in a beta state - heck, a pre beta state. *g*
So far there are precisely two areas available: the introductory area and the sorta introductory area. There are things to do, people to meet and a few difficult choices to make.
My concerns:
- I'm pretty new to SN formatting. Have I broken things? I've probably broken things. Yell at me if things come crashing down around your head.
- See the above, but this time in regards to pacing. There's a time-limit involved. You mightn't have time to explore every available option. If they're dull as rocks, that'll be a relief. If they're not and the effect is irritating, please yell at me.
- It's wordy. I'm a fan of wordy, when it's good words. If you think that these aren't, please yell at me.
- The sidebar. I'm not sure that it hasn't become cluttered. If you feel it's a mess, please - well. You know.
I promise a future treat to current testers, but anything that I gave you now wouldn't be useful for a while yet anyway. You'll see why. So instead I can only offer you my very, very deep thanks. I welcome your abuse. I welcome your critiques. I welcome your abusive critiques.
Thank you. *g*
ETA: Whoops. A link: http://risendarkness.storynexus.com . I didn't forget it on account of nerves. Really.
edited by ArianeEmory on 1/12/2013
edited by ArianeEmory on 1/12/2013
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