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Playtest: Assent

Shawn Tallon Posts: 17 10/22/2012	Hey Everyone! I am opening up my world: Assent, to play-testers! It's a linear story line right now, following a protagonist named Subject 39, a man with no past and an open future. It's set in a sci-fi-ish world. It is VERY short right now but I would like some feedback on the story. So please, take a look and let me know what you think! I included a RESET card that destroys your current game so you can go back and re-read. Thanks! URL: assentplaytest.storynexus.com
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CharlottePike Posts: 39 10/22/2012	I don't appear to have any pinned cards. Could you look into this?
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CharlottePike Posts: 39 10/22/2012	It took me a while to figure this out, but to remove a requirement, all you have to do is set the amount of it required to nothing, meaning you wouldn't have a number entered into the minimum or maximum. I hope this helps!
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CharlottePike Posts: 39 10/22/2012	I think you should at least format the letters into smaller paragraphs sections where you can. Generally, whenever someone starts talking or where the subject changes is a good place to change a paragraph. The spoiler very much changed my opinion on what's going on. While I've seen stories like that before, I very much enjoy seeing the different takes on it.
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