Seeking feedback for my fan project

Hello, delicious friends! I hope that all manner of thing is well with you. For the last few months, I’ve spent a bit of time designing a Fallen London tabletop RPG in the vein of Apocalypse World and Blades in the Dark. So far, I’ve written moves for six of the planned ten classes, done a bit of work into the basic moves of investigation, and studied the Knife and Candle forum for inspiration. You can see all my work on my blog. I’d appreciate any feedback, advice, and criticism, especially from anyone who knows how to GM or hack tabletop RPG’s. The next steps include writing moves for the Pickpocket, the Murderer, the Scholar, and the Spy, then writing the complete list of basic moves and interactions.

I hope it isn’t uncouth of me to advertise myself on these forums. I just haven’t been receiving very much feedback since my audience is so small, and I really need advice to make this project as good as it can be. Many thanks for reading, delicious friends, and may all manner of thing be well with you!