Mr Eaten's Lament (Music)

Not quite sure if music belongs here, but here goes: http://tindeck.com/listen/wkfv

&quotOh, sing a lament for Mr Eaten~
Betrayed, scarred, stained and chained,

They promised that all shall be well
Did you appreciate the irony,
As they pushed you down to drown?

Sing a lament for Mr Eaten~
For all he’s lost,
Body, soul, even his name,
Only ravening nothingness left

Candles extinguished and Eaten all up,
What can you possibly hope to gain?

All shall be Well~
All shall not be Well~

A reckoning will not be postponed indefinitely.&quot

I’m not very experienced at the whole singing/songwriting thing, and I did it pretty quickly, so I apologize for any lack of quality it may suffer from. I might revisit it later.

I welcome praise and criticism alike, as long as you remain civil. I am always eager to learn.

At the end you sounded quite a lot like John de Lancie.

… yes!

Maybe he is he?! eyes warily

… yes!

Maybe he is he?! eyes warily[/quote]
I am 90% confident this is not the case, seeing as I had to google him.
…Is it a compliment to be compared to him? I don’t really have a reference point here.

… yes!

Maybe he is he?! eyes warily[/quote]
I am 90% confident this is not the case, seeing as I had to google him.
…Is it a compliment to be compared to him? I don’t really have a reference point here.[/quote]

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It most certainly is.

LISTEN: QMx Presents: The Raven read by John De Lancie - YouTube

[/quote]I see. Well, I’m quite flattered.
I was even planning to do a reading of The Raven at some point. A little differently, of course, but I can see he is quite skilled.
edited by Alexander Feld on 12/13/2013

[/quote]I see. Well, I’m quite flattered.
I was even planning to do a reading of The Raven at some point. A little differently, of course, but I can see he is quite skilled.
edited by Alexander Feld on 12/13/2013[/quote]

That’s all well and good, but it’s far from his greatest role…

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ke_AkJC92IA

I have no clue how to get the video to embed. Humbug.
[li]edited by cheshster on 12/14/2013[/li][li]
edited by cheshster on 12/14/2013