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Cash DeCuir
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1/28/2016


Twenty-five years ago, the Duke abandoned his family in Vienna.

Twenty years ago, the Duchess sought him in London. He blinded her. She died in Vienna.

Today, their daughter descends to the Neath. She has her mother's bloodied bandages, three leads to her father, and a knife.

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Passionario
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1/28/2016
OK, I'm freaking out a bit here.

See, Passionario is an avid player of the Great Game (and was one before he descended to the Neath), an enthusiastic fan of Sinning Jenny, a regular visitor at Clathermont's and an old acquaintance of his Amused Lordship. He also spent an entire year in the Cave of the Nadir once (because I took a break from the game and logged off there).

A few days ago, I created a character who is meant to represent his daughter, descending into the Neath to find him.

Then, just this morning, I changed his destiny to the one in which he ends up essentially sightless.

And now that I've met the Waltzing Duke, I know exactly what a Dread Surmise feels like.

...

It's me. It was me all along. And now it's too late.

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Guy Scrum
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1/29/2016
I may be a bit juvenile, but [spoiler]"his heart was never wholly in it, even when the rest of him was" (according to Sinning Jenny)[/spoiler] was a pretty great pun.

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TheThirdPolice
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2/19/2016
Dubinee Finnat wrote:
He truly loved her, too, but he feared that the Thief would use his love for her against him: end of wife, end of problem!


To be fair, your relationship does lose some magic after you mistake your wife for a monster and gouge out her eyes. Not that I speak from experience.

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MrBurnside
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2/19/2016
Dubinee Finnat wrote:
I dearly hope that the Waltzing Duke suffered greatly as he stumbled blindly to his death on the surface. Did he think that he had beguiled me with his cultivated charm? Oh, he was such a refined gentleman, so distinguished and well-mannered, but let us not forget that he was faithless to his wife, a lot, and that he blinded her and abandoned her to die when she became an inconvenience. He truly loved her, too, but he feared that the Thief would use his love for her against him: end of wife, end of problem! Heartbroken over it, of course, but he did not regret it, because the Thief would have done worse. Well, maybe so, but did she have a say in the matter? Did he offer her a choice? As far as I'm concerned he was no better than the meanest wife-beating worker from the docks, and quite a lot worse, and he can take his old-world manners and stick them where he'll choke on them.


I prefer to look at the Duke as someone with an Ambition, or maybe being like a seeker. No one unwilling to put out their wife's/husband's eyes in order to stay alive and accomplish their goal has progressed too far down the Ambitions; certainly such things might be expected of a seeker. And after all: he was, potentially at risk of real death.

The Waltzing Duke was not supposed to be in his right mind. He was obsessed, driven, possessed. Of course he was crap as a human being. So, by all accounts, was Bob Fosse.

So is my main. When arriving in the Neath, he was kind, generous and law abiding. He just ripped open someone's skull for blackmail material.

One of the most under-discussed (which is not to say under-appreciated) features of fallen London is the relation of information to wealth. How bits of oblique references can coalesce in the context of each-other and how once information is given in payment the character has no more use for it. It was already leveraged to it's greatest extent. Much of the joy of playing comes from the player echoing the actions of the character in teasing out the nature of the world around them. It's like all the best parts of a Gene Wolfe novel.

[spoiler]To find out that the Duke had a secret that the Thief would bother hunting him for. That the Bazaar wanted back. Oh no. That kind of knowledge, that kind of leverage... It had to be mine.[/spoiler]

It's why I wasn't concerned with the Echo value of the "reward." I got exactly what I wanted out of it.
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Gonen
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2/7/2016
Just finished this. Took an evening with two full candles, put the "Tales from the Vienna Woods" on repeat (Ian Hart, excellent thinking!) and played it through.
This story is my new top exceptional story, passing the famous Lost in Reflections.
Perhaps the music gave it an unfair advantage, but I really got in the mood.
Made me want to suggest my wife we return to ballroom dance lessons (we won't though. We won't persist. Again. Maybe a single awkward dance at our living room, then).
I really liked the investigation part, interacting with familiar faces, especially those we less interact with on a daily basis.
Next was the long conversation at the carnival. Excellent piece, intriguing, shocking, melancholic. The writer succeeded in making me care for the duke, switching emotions from shock to excitement to sadness to curiosity.
Bravo for arts, as well! Beautiful poster, beautiful icons. Hurrah for scandalous new stockings - on full display!
Oh, if Jenn here is a new companion at the Feast, profits will be sky rocketing this winter. Mark - my - words.

A very well done. I am now doing a standing ovation.

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Ben
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1/29/2016
I loved the little looks into the lives of sinning Jenny and the other characters at the start.
The end satasfied really solidly for me too...

Blood? *cough* on my hands... *wipes* nope... you didn't SEE anything.

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Ruddertail
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1/29/2016
The reward for the option to [spoiler] let her have her revenge [/spoiler] is something very silent. The kind of thing you get when even silence is removed.

So, not the most exciting thing. But as a nemesis I really had to choose that.
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MidnightVoyager
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5/11/2016
suinicide wrote:
[spoiler]
One thing that still bothers me is that this whole story was started because the ghost of the wife appeared to his daughter. When have we ever seen a ghost before? (Maybe that was the thief of faces, and this story was it using us to hunt down that piece of the tragedian procedures. In which case, stealing them is the only correct option)

Edit: Also, ghosts on the surface? That is pretty weird.
[/spoiler]

edited by suinicide on 5/10/2016


That isn't weird at all. There's (was) a whole social action for it! You can appear as a ghost to someone on the Surface if you are dead.

http://fallenlondon.wikia.com/wiki/Haunt_someone_on_the_Surface_instead

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Gul al-Ahlaam
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5/12/2016
I think it might be worth noting that in the first face-tailor story, the Thief of Faces appears to you in a dream in the form of a wakeful idol, and encourages you to kill a bird and trade it for a skin-mask, so you can sneak into the garden. If you choose to obey it, you get a bunch of Fate (more than any other branch on that storylet, or indeed any other Fate-granting story branch in the game, to my knowledge). As I remember this also gives you a unique dialogue option with the Bishop at the beginning of Flint Part 1, though I I never played it.


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    Passionario
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    1/29/2016
    If this story becomes replayable, I'll pay Fate to reset it and leave it unfinished halfways, just to keep Jenny as a perpetually accessible storylet.

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    5/10/2016
    [spoiler]
    One thing that still bothers me is that this whole story was started because the ghost of the wife appeared to his daughter. When have we ever seen a ghost before? (Maybe that was the thief of faces, and this story was it using us to hunt down that piece of the tragedian procedures. In which case, stealing them is the only correct option)

    Edit: Also, ghosts on the surface? That is pretty weird.
    [/spoiler]

    edited by suinicide on 5/10/2016

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    Absintheuse
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    5/10/2016
    The Waltz that Moved the World is now available for Fate!

    The writer behind the tale has also hinted there may be something left uncovered: https://twitter.com/CashDecuir/status/730020138129444864

    edited by Absintheuse on 5/10/2016
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    The Duke of Waltham
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    2/5/2016
    MidnightVoyager wrote:
    Seeing as how my character is presumed dead on the Surface, I'd really rather the game not assume I have Surface friends still.

    Well, I never. You've just solved the mystery of Lord Lucan's disappearance. (We'll just assume that the London he fled in 1974 was a replacement built sometime after the Fall.) All we have to do now is wait for the gimmick account to appear.

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    metasynthie
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    1/29/2016
    I liked the subtle flavors of this one enough to wish it had a little more opportunity to get to know or understand the Aesthete -- we hear an awful lot about the Duke's activities, and she ends up seeming a flat revenge-seeker by comparison, especially when we wind up at an ending with such duality. I suppose that balances out against the greedy desire to kill the Duke for his secret, though. I also love how the Thief of Faces is present in this story only as a figure of rumour and seeds of paranoia... OR IS HE?! Now I'm awfully suspicious of His Amused Lordship's fear of death-talk and loitering nonchalantly around Dilmun business.

    In any case, I have two fragments of the tragedy procedures now, and they both say different things! I wonder how many fragments you'd need for a whole copy. I suspect... 49.

    As for the Old Man, isn't he...

    [spoiler]...the same gentleman who appears in Sunless Sea's Vienna?[/spoiler]

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    TheThirdPolice
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    1/31/2016
    Everyone loves the epic, lore-rich exceptional stories, but this one may be the most successful at a personal tale, where the big events are backdrop to character relationships.

    I enjoyed the "Leads" section quite a bit, due to both mechanics and getting to talk to well-known Londoners.

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    dov
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    1/28/2016
    Ian Hart wrote:
    I strongly recommend "Tales from the Vienna Woods" as a soundtrack while playing through the content

    THANK YOU FOR THIS!!
    Such a great suggestion.

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    fellow_bix
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    1/31/2016
    I like how painful it was to make a choice in this story.

    [spoiler]I wish I knew more about what happened to the Duchess, as the way she expired sounded quite dramatic and terrifying - I was half-expecting the daughter to stab the old man in the back, anyway, for all the horror finding the poor lady and watching her expire might've caused.[/spoiler]

    Also, I hope it's not too off-topic, but that poster for this exceptional story is gorgeous. Has to be my favorite thus far.

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    Ian Hart
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    1/28/2016
    Without a doubt my favorite Exceptional Story, and quite possibly my favorite piece of Fallen London content, and I've played alllll of it.

    I strongly recommend "Tales from the Vienna Woods" as a soundtrack while playing through the content, and, of course, to not skip any possible avenue of discussion.

    [spoiler]
    The Old Man and the Woods in Winter are now my new favorite mystery in Fallen London, and I can barely wait for new content regarding those topics!
    [/spoiler]

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    Rupho Schartenhauer
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    9/29/2016
    Uh - this piece of SMEN content I just played seems to be a pretty big, not-very-subtle hint at the identity of the Thief-of-Faces.

    (don't click if you don't want to be spoilered - more spoilers follow - read at your own peril)
    [spoiler]I re-read the conversation with His Amused Lordship - there isn't anything obvious, but he does remember a lot of the Waltzing Duke's youth - who's a very old man now. If he was a guest at the Duke's balls then, shouldn't he be as old as him now?
    Also: "I know why you're here! A colleague of mine mentioned your interest!" Which 'colleague' exactly? Since when do peers of the realm have 'colleagues'?
    And finally, of course, his reaction to you talking about Death is pretty suspicious, too - that has been pointed out already, upthread.

    Currently, I'd say His Amused Lordship is the Thief-of-Faces. It would also give a pretty compelling reason for his patronage of the Dilmun Club...[/spoiler]

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    5/11/2016
    For the beware your beginnings, I was interpreting it as the motivation, or beginning, of the story. Why she came down here and all that. The ghost of her mom appearing.

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    5/11/2016
    That isn't weird at all. There's (was) a whole social action for it! You can appear as a ghost to someone on the Surface if you are dead.

    http://fallenlondon.wikia.com/wiki/Haunt_someone_on_the_Surface_instead

    Despite that being a close to perfect argument against my idea, I have a few more points to make. The wife died on the surface, incinerated by the sun. Since death is an iron rule in the surface, and whatever remained was consumed, I feel rather certain she is not coming back.
    Also there was a twenty year gap between her dying, and her ghost appearing. Thats pretty large for a revenge seeking ghost.
    edited by suinicide on 5/11/2016

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    Optimatum
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    5/11/2016
    Beware our beginnings? Were WE the Thief all along!?

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    5/10/2016
    I think that's a bit different. The Ghostly Presence is only a presence, after demi-god tried to possess it. (If I'm interpreting that right). Point is, the author died under strange circumstances that could have allowed that. [spoiler]
    The wife had a full appearance at night (Also, coincidentally when the light is weakest). Completely appearing is different than a vague presence. And if it took a demi-god possession to make the vague presence, what would it take for the full appearance to occur? Especially on the surface.

    Thinking on it more, I think this might be it. Something neathly occurred on the surface, in violation of the judgements. Humans can't do that without quite a bit of help (in the form of the liberation) And I doubt that would be helping her much. (Unless I'm missing something) (And by it I mean the thief of faces impersonating her mother so it can hunt down the secret. [/spoiler]

    edited by suinicide on 5/10/2016

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    5/10/2016
    An occurrence! Your 'Putting the Pieces Together: The ghosts of London' Quality is now 1!

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    James Sinclair
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    5/11/2016
    So perhaps the 'ghost' that appeared to the daughter on the Surface was the Thief-of-Faces? That would mean the Thief can survive topside (albeit only in the dark).

    The sidebar quote about Hesperidean Cider (and also the visions from Lost in Reflections) implies that drinking Cider allows you to survive on the Surface, even after long-term exposure to the Neath. Is the Cider strong enough to allow a Snuffer -- forgive me, a Cousin -- to do the same?

    And then there's 'Beware your beginnings'. But beginnings of what, or for whom? For the daughter? The Duke? The player?

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    M. Cinder
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    5/11/2016
    Zero wrote:
    Optimatum wrote:
    Beware our beginnings? Were WE the Thief all along!?
    I already read theories about the player character being the Thief-Of-Faces, but I don't exactly remember the details. Can someone enlighten me?
    It would explain the Thief-of-Faces' truancy in all stories except in name.
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    Ian Hart
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    5/11/2016
    TheThirdPolice wrote:
    Unfortunately I didn't screenshot any of Waltz, so I've just gone on a tangent rereading Flint instead.

    I don't think it's possible for the protagonist to be the Thief of Faces:
    * I cannot think of any implication that the Thief is ever unaware of his identity. He seems to keep his motivations in any form.
    * You meet many characters on the lookout for the Thief, and none of them suspect you. Snuffers identify you as human. The Pilgrim-Wakers think the Thief follows you, but only on one of your meetings — so that doesn't seem like a clue.
    * It seems unlikely that the Thief has a soul, let alone one unrecognized by devils.
    * Going meta, this storytelling decision would repel many players.

    On the other hand, it is fun to speculate:
    * A handwavy explanation about the Thief possessing people rather than imitating them could remove some of the objections above.
    * Alternatively, we could read willfully too much into the Thief changing its "self" as well as its shape.
    * The Art of Murder ending makes more sense if you're the Thief. (The ritual succeeds.)
    * The player recognizes part of the Thief of Face ritual map in Art of Murder, for no clear reason.
    * The player's face can change in Unwell Flint. This follows a draught supposedly similar to cherty griswine... but it doesn't seem so. The Thiefy revelations could be memories.



    I absolutely agree with the meta argument that it's doubtful the player will have to turn out to be the thief of faces, but there is a theory my friend and I came up with a while back that the Thief could be the player. There is a process, one pursued by the Bishop and in Sunless Sea, by which a greater entity can become a lesser one. If the Thief of Faces wanted to stop hating everyone and everything, that is, if he hates what he is, one route would be to follow that process and become a human, perhaps absorbing some memories of a person in New Newgate and replacing them. Obviously the process would make him much much weaker (explaining your starting stats) but in many ways it would be the best of both worlds, hiding him from those who pursue him, allowing him to live without hating everything, but also being better than any normal human in a number of ways (such as the player's stubborn inability to permanently die or go insane, and their incredible growth over a relatively short period of time.) I could go into more detail, but I don't think it's really a relevant topic to this thread, since a twist like that would have to be in a far broader piece of content.

    Edit: Apologies for the double post, my previous post was written before TheThirdPolice's post appeared.
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    MidnightVoyager
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    1/28/2016
    Ian Hart wrote:
    Without a doubt my favorite Exceptional Story, and quite possibly my favorite piece of Fallen London content, and I've played alllll of it.

    I strongly recommend "Tales from the Vienna Woods" as a soundtrack while playing through the content, and, of course, to not skip any possible avenue of discussion.


    About your spoiler:

    [spoiler]The Woods in Winter sound an awful lot like the Castle of Forests in Parabola. "Here is the Castle of Forests (white trees in darkness or black bark in snow?)"[/spoiler]
    edited by MidnightVoyager on 1/28/2016

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    1/28/2016
    A minor infelicity in the wording of the instructions text at the end:

    [spoiler]If you choose to encourage a reconciliation by dancing with the Duke, the text says "You will need to dance with the Aesthete and seek an attempted reconciliation with her, if you have not done so already." But you are only given the option to let her dance with _him_, not you.

    And then you can whisper to her, so it works out okay, but it was a little scary, because it didn't seem like it ought to work based on what was said.[/spoiler]

    I thought this was lovely, very melancholy and emotionally engaging. Echoes start here.

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    1/29/2016
    Does anyone have any theories on

    [spoiler]why he blinded his wife? That seems to be the one great inexplicable act he committed.[/spoiler]

    Unless I missed something, it appears quite unnecesary.

    Edit: spoiler tags
    edited by Juno on 1/29/2016

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    Residual Toast
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    1/29/2016
    Juno wrote:
    Does anyone have any theories on
    ...questions...

    Unless I missed something, it appears quite unnecesary.

    edited by Juno on 1/29/2016


    [spoiler]Pretty sure it's because she was dancing weirdly, and he thought she was the Thief, and tried to peel her face off?[/spoiler]
    edited by Residual Toast on 1/29/2016

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    1/29/2016
    Only one set of spoiler tags per post, Toast, or they won't show up properly! And, yes, it appears to have been a case of mistaken identity and a sadly unnecessary attempt at self-defense.

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    1/29/2016
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    Residual Toast
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    1/29/2016
    Hmm this ending raises some interesting questions.
    It's not possible that the Player Character is [spoiler]the thief of faces right? He is said to live in the prison where you start, and you do pick your face. But everything we know about snuffers says they can only die once, right?

    Also, do we know who the Presumption, and the Red Levy are? And why Mr Pages would take precautions with them against the Thief stealing one of their faces? And if it might be the case, which one it could be?

    Also, Also, has anything been added to woods in winter? I tried checking my nadir, but the cards weren't cooperating. [/spoiler]
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    1/28/2016
    Very initial thoughts: I think this is my favourite Exceptional Story start - very engaging and intriguing from the very beginnning.

    Most other Exceptional stories (even those I rank as my overall favourites) took a while to get really interesting for me. This story got me hooked immediately.

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    Emain Ablach
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    1/28/2016
    There it is. I finished the story.

    I really liked it. The characters had enough depth to feel for them, and the choices made me hesitate quite a bit. I guess I regret my final choice, and whould have regretted it as well if I chose another ending anyway. Which proves that the story was immersive enough for me to think that way.

    Two things seemed a bit weak to me. The beginning, how it is set in motion [spoiler]The Daughter doesn't know anything about you but ask you for help in finding a dangerous murderer... it's quite quick, I'd like more time to get to know her and then being asked this. And the way she knew who to talk to because a ghost told her "ask him, her and them" was... I don't know, it's kind of a deus ex machina to me. PS : sinning jenny was, as always, sweet and moving, this story made me realise how I like this character.
    And for once, I found that the ending is a bit... tasteless. I feel like it lacks something, maybe a bit of intensity.

    I didn't quite get the whole thing and how it's related to the thief, it is linked to the story but feel quite far and distant. Maybe my level of english is to blame and I missed some clues.[/spoiler]

    But anyway, it was a great time, well written, like all monthly stories ! A big thank you !
    edited by Emain Ablach on 1/28/2016
    edited by Emain Ablach on 1/28/2016

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    Curious Foreigner
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    1/28/2016
    Thinking about it, I find the ending I got hilarious.
    [spoiler]So the daughter comes all the way from Vienna to take revenge on her father, and what does she take from him? Eyes he can't use, a secret he went to great lengths to forget, and a life that won't stay gone for long. And all because my character found it funnier not to tell her how Death (not) works in the Neath...[/spoiler]
    Catherine Raymond wrote:
    No, indeed, I still have my cup of Griswine. I am wondering how one gets to use it.

    While you can't use it in the game right now, it would be very handy if you ever need to poison someone in a non-lethal and easily reversible, but potentially permanent manner.
    edited by Curious Foreigner on 1/28/2016

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    Mordaine Barimen
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    2/2/2016
    Ian Hart, it was Cash DeCuir.

    Might I also take a moment to plug this topic?

    Fallen London and the responsible miscreants
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    MidnightVoyager
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    2/4/2016
    Lomias wrote:
    The Duke of Waltham wrote:

    Hey! She's holding on pretty well for a sixty-five-year-old Austrian... pauper? Probably not, but it is true that we know next to nothing about this woman. We've come to know the Waltzing Duke fairly well, but the Resolute Aesthete is a cipher; even the fact that we refer to her as an aesthete has no obvious justification other than her appreciation of a particular piece of music—and popular music, at that. I suppose that bothers me a little. Still, not knowing more than the barest of outlines about her life does make some sense in the context of the story, and it might even be besides the point. It is the Duke and his actions that form the heart of the story, and death in the hands of his daughter is merely one of the choices we have in responding to what we have learned about him. For some it would be poetic justice; for others, a family tragedy we have no business preventing, having already played our assigned part in this affair. Either way, her part is secondary. The focus is not on whether we want to see the Aesthete kill her father, but on whether we want to see him die by her blade.


    True, but things could be more interesting if Resolute Aesthete is an old friend of ours, that's what I meant by connection.
    edited by Lomias on 2/3/2016


    Seeing as how my character is presumed dead on the Surface, I'd really rather the game not assume I have Surface friends still.

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    2/10/2016
    Belatedly recording my thoughts regarding the affair of the Waltz.

    I dearly hope that the Waltzing Duke suffered greatly as he stumbled blindly to his death on the surface. Did he think that he had beguiled me with his cultivated charm? Oh, he was such a refined gentleman, so distinguished and well-mannered, but let us not forget that he was faithless to his wife, a lot, and that he blinded her and abandoned her to die when she became an inconvenience. He truly loved her, too, but he feared that the Thief would use his love for her against him: end of wife, end of problem! Heartbroken over it, of course, but he did not regret it, because the Thief would have done worse. Well, maybe so, but did she have a say in the matter? Did he offer her a choice? As far as I'm concerned he was no better than the meanest wife-beating worker from the docks, and quite a lot worse, and he can take his old-world manners and stick them where he'll choke on them.

    Not only that, but he did all of this in the course of combating the threat of Anarchy, didn't he? Well, this one's from an anarchist, dukesy. Say hello to the Sun for me when you get to the top.

    All in all, a very enjoyable and satisfying evening. smile
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    2/19/2016
    Interestingly I found my previous comment got 2 thumbs down. Of course people can disagree with me, but I think they could have replied me if they think I am really wrong to say that. Let me make myself clear, I am not saying the text of Waltz is not well-written, but it is a story that player's final decision has no further influence, and it does not reveal much mystery (if it has any), nor does it involve much risk. And these elements, my delicious friends, are the essence of Fallen London (and dark humor, of course). Am I asking for too much? Seriously, I don't think so.

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    genesis
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    5/10/2016
    Hm. I do wonder what Cash meant.. I thought I had explored it pretty exhaustively.. He could mean that there is a branch that they know *noone* at all had played. Or he could mean that there is a branch that some people had played but not many and its significance wasn't raised on the discussion threads. Or he could mean that it's not so much that there is an unplayed branch but rather that there is an implication that can be pieced together from otherwise easily available branches

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    Diptych
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    5/10/2016
    I was wondering about that... but there is the Ghostly Presence of the Feast of the Rose. Ghost status: uncertain??

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    absimiliard
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    5/10/2016
    There's also the fail for pretending to be the Phantom of the Opera . . . I mean the Antimacassar. If I recall correctly you fail because the actual phantom terrifies you into spoiling your timing. Been a bit though, so I'm not certain of the words, but I recall going "Huh, I guess ghosts might be real in the Neath."

    {edit: because the presence, or lack thereof, of the word 'not' kind of effects the meaning of a sentence.}
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    TheThirdPolice
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    2/3/2016
    Yes, it would be more interesting. But you can't achieve that connection just by telling the player she's an old friend; it's too artificial. You have to build that connection naturally, and that's just not feasible for every story.

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    Rupho Schartenhauer
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    2/7/2016
    The Duke of Waltham wrote:

    Well, I never. You've just solved the mystery of Lord Lucan's disappearance. (We'll just assume that the London he fled in 1974 was a replacement built sometime after the Fall.) All we have to do now is wait for the gimmick account to appear.

    Someone already did that, but apparently they didn't stay very long.
    edited by Rupho Schartenhauer on 2/7/2016

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    Mordaine Barimen
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    1/31/2016
    really enjoyed this story. I'd love to know more about the Duke's past, since it sounded like he was up to the level of unwise brilliance normally associated with PC plans.

    edit- also, thank you metasynthie. Good to know.
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    Optimatum
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    1/29/2016
    metasynthie wrote:
    As for the Old Man, isn't he... <spoiler here>


    I don't think so.

    [spoiler]From the parallels in certain Exalted memories, he seems to be some analogue spymaster-figure for the White.[/spoiler]

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    metasynthie
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    1/29/2016
    Well, that's exactly why I was making that supposition, really.

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    The Duke of Waltham
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    1/29/2016
    Kylestien wrote:
    Okay so I have a bug now: [see page 1]

    "Try this again" and "Onwards!" make no difference at all in storylets like this (which auto-fire on the fulfilment of a certain condition, such as a previous action that will give you a particular value for a quality), where the only way out is through the options you are given. Mind you, only the options that say "This will end the story" actually end the story; the others are not final.

    Ginneon Thursday wrote:
    In any case...

    [spoiler]Ginneon Thursday wrote:
    ...Vienna seems a much darker place. Though Europe may simply be trading its own looming, nationalistic wars for a broader class/ideological struggle.

    Have we been told before in such clear terms about the chaos that apparently engulfed Europe after the Fall?[/spoiler]

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    Shadowcthuhlu
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    1/28/2016
    Has anyone chosen to steal his secret?

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    The Vengeful Huntsman
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    1/28/2016
    The conclusion in which you take the secret is echoed on my profile and the secret itself is displayed as my mantelpiece.

    On a separate note can you use the items gained from the Flint arc yet, or will that come later?
    edited by Wilhelm the Stalwart on 1/28/2016

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    wraith
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    1/28/2016
    Robin Mask wrote:
    I'm a bit confused by one thing . . .

    [spoiler] I chose an option to go after him, without telling the daughter . . . now - as I await actions to refresh - she just followed him into his cab. The only option I have to pick is 'reunion', even though I never intended (and never picked) to reunite them . . . I don't think I even mentioned her to him! Is this intentional?[/spoiler]

    don't worry, it's intentional, wait and see, you will have choices, though choices

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    Docteur
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    1/28/2016
    Robin Mask wrote:
    I'm a bit confused by one thing . . .



    [spoiler]She had you followed.[/spoiler]

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    Mr Sables
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    1/28/2016
    Thanks Wraith and Docteur smile

    I must have missed that part. I'm getting close to the end now, so I've found the new choices and enjoy the story. I'm little upset one option is missing: [spoiler] to tell him to get away from her, as opposing to just killing him or reconciling them, as I don't think reconcile is a good thing to do and I don't think killing him is right.[/spoiler] Who knows, maybe that'll be an option coming up, but I feel as if it probably won't be . . .


    Edit: The story was excellent, very well paced and a perfect length, but I felt the ending was a little too abrupt . . . there was so much emotional investment of both characters, but so little closure regarding them (no explanation why they did/felt as they did, what happened to them after they did what they did, just a sort of: "they did this, the end"). I would have liked to have seen a little more. That being said, I thought the reward was quite generous and well appreciated smile
    edited by RobinMask on 1/28/2016
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    Faey
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    1/28/2016
    I greatly enjoyed this story. I was a little sad that after reconciliation I wasn't able to further delve into his secret (especially after reading the result of killing him yourself).

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    Diptych
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    1/28/2016
    Well, that was thoroughly intriguing. I've been going through aristocratic family trees, trying to determine if the characters have real-world analogues - mostly Habsburgs, but when we're talking aristocratic family trees, that practically goes without saying.

    [spoiler]So this Old Man sounds Chestertonian as hell. And there was something very like The Waste Land in the descriptions of Vienna. But perhaps I'm reading too much into things.[/spoiler]

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    MidnightVoyager
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    1/28/2016
    Optimatum wrote:
    Does anyone have the ending and reward(s) from making way for the Aesthete?

    MidnightVoyager wrote:
    About your spoiler:

    <spoiler here>


    My thoughts on the topic, and an unrelated question:

    <spoiler here>


    [spoiler]And then there's the matter of the tent. I mean, out of nowhere, a tent playing that particular waltz. The tent has black tentpoles and white lights. Reality, wtf r u doin?[/spoiler]

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    Catherine Raymond
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    1/28/2016
    I have just reached the series of storylets one must choose from to achieve the climax of the story.

    [spoiler] I am torn. Morally, I think it would be most moral to encourage father and daughter to reconcile. My character (I am only playing this Story with my main character), I am certain, would allow the Aesthete to have her revenge. But the player in me burns to know what secret the Duke holds--or whether, indeed, the Nadir has stolen it from him despite his words. What to do? [/spoiler]

    I do think the choices posed are the most difficult I've seen in FL since the non-Fate-locked story of the Contessa that I encountered so many years ago. Bravo, Failbetter!
    edited by cathyr19355 on 1/28/2016

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    James Sinclair
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    5/11/2016
    Ian Hart wrote:

    There is a lot of speculation out there about him, and I desperately want to know more if anyone has anything.


    (spoilers for Sunless Sea)


    The Old Man in Vienna appears in Sunless Sea; you can interact with him by travelling up the Cumean Canal and taking a train to Vienna. An additional storylet becomes available in Vienna if you're made it past a certain point in the Ambition to travel East.

    He seems to be a parallel -- not directly related to, but behaving in a similar capacity -- to a Judgement known as "The White" (who is also mentioned at the Chapel of Lights). Just as the Old Man is a spymaster for the Great Game, the White is a spymaster among the Judgements. The Old Man dispatched the Waltzing Duke to Fallen London, while the White dispatched a judgement (Salt) through the Avid Horizon and into the Neath (presumably to investigate the Bazaar's activities). Both the Duke and Salt have ended up injured by their experiences in the Neath.

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    Ian Hart
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    5/11/2016
    James Sinclair wrote:
    TheThirdPolice wrote:
    Perhaps more useful to stay within the Fallen London world. It sounds like the Old Man is testing many people (presumably young spies), and perhaps sending them to the Neath to worm their way to the vaults of the Bazaar, or to gather secrets such as the Duke found. Do we have any guesses for other agents of the Old Man (the Clathermonts?), or — since we've been spiralling down this well — evidence that the protagonist is an unwitting agent itself?


    It's quite possible. I think the key connection Cash tweeted about may indeed be the 'Woods in Winter' card found in the Nadir. The text for the different storylets on the card suggest to me that the player was sent/manipulated into travelling to London, at the behest of the Old Man.

    For example, the minor text differences between the two versions of 'The Dance Goes On' storylet on this card (one available if you've reached Entwined in the Intrigues of the Clathermont Family 30, one if you haven't) suggest that a) the woman you're talking to is Millicent Clathermont, a.k.a. The Lady in Lilac, and b) You received some sort of aid from her regarding your Ambition, aid which was subsequently forgotten thanks to Lilac's irrigomancy.

    Furthermore, the Old Man wants, more than anything, to know the secrets of the Bazaar, as seen on the 'Fortune's Page' storylet on the Woods in Winter card. Lilac is privy to some of these secrets, so it makes sense that she is somehow involved with the Old Man.

    So perhaps the Old Man orchestrated the player being sent down to the Neath by manipulating their Ambition, with the player either unaware of it or having forgotten it due to irrigo? This would mean that the player's beginnings might be eerily similar to those of the Duke...



    The player's presence in the Neath is certainly a result of manipulation, though at least in the case of Ambition Nemesis, it's by the hand of a higher power than the Old Man.

    [spoiler]
    As far as the daughter, here is the ending you are referring to. http://fallenlondon.storynexus.com/Profile/Antifinity?fromEchoId=7680603
    It strikes me as perfectly in character for a spy who is aware she failed in reaching her goal. In fact, the way she reacts seems to only make sense if she was previously aware of the presence of the secret. If she were truly innocent she should be outraged at your "failure" or she should arrange to pay you for your "success". Instead, she clearly knows that you saw through her deception and claimed the real prize of the entire affair.

    You could argue that she would then try to retrieve it from you, but that would be a futile gesture, since a significant part of the secret's value was in no one else knowing it (which is why the Duke had to erase his own memory of it) and of course because the player is a far more dangerous individual than she is.
    [/spoiler]

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    xKiv
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    5/11/2016
    Optimatum wrote:
    Beware our beginnings? Were WE the Thief all along!?


    Or the snuffer in new newgate.

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    Ian Hart
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    5/11/2016
    I suspect we're on the right track here...
    https://twitter.com/CashDecuir/status/730373380130672641
    I just wonder if we're looking for a specific in-game thing, or just an observation about the story?

    I have lots of theories about the story, it was my favorite! I'm just not sure how to test them.

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    Ian Hart
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    5/11/2016
    [spoiler]The mystery I found the most interesting, and that I desperately hope is explored more deeply in future content, is the Old Man. Everything about him as a character is fascinating. The one mystery that's very relevant to this story though is how he intended to claim the secret, which was the beginning of this whole series of events. Was he in some way responsible for how it ended?
    Edit:Has anyone tried playing the Woods of Winter card at various points in the story? It'd take weeks to test every meaningful step in the story, but that's likely either the memory of the Duke, or a memory that the Duke mistook for his own, and either way it's highly relevant.
    Edit-Edit: Possible (probable?) deception, the daughter is the Old Man's agent. That'd explain the weirdness of her story, and it suggests that yes, in the reconcile ending she does eventually kill him and steal the eye. It certainly matches her behavior after you kill him.
    Edit-Edit-Edit: and/or his wife was the agent, which is why she was human, but also not actually his wife.
    [/spoiler]
    edited by Ian Hart on 5/11/2016
    edited by Ian Hart on 5/11/2016
    edited by Ian Hart on 5/11/2016

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    Ian Hart
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    5/11/2016
    The only reason I feel like I might be on the wrong track is that I think this theory was already mentioned, either in the forum or on saint-arthur. It might have just been a discussion I had with my friends.

    All the facts do seem to add up for [spoiler]The daughter to have been an agent. It's even foreshadowed in him failing to recognize his wife.[/spoiler]

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    TheThirdPolice
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    5/11/2016
    Unfortunately I didn't screenshot any of Waltz, so I've just gone on a tangent rereading Flint instead.

    I don't think it's possible for the protagonist to be the Thief of Faces:
    * I cannot think of any implication that the Thief is ever unaware of his identity. He seems to keep his motivations in any form.
    * You meet many characters on the lookout for the Thief, and none of them suspect you. Snuffers identify you as human. The Pilgrim-Wakers think the Thief follows you, but only on one of your meetings — so that doesn't seem like a clue.
    * It seems unlikely that the Thief has a soul, let alone one unrecognized by devils.
    * Going meta, this storytelling decision would repel many players.

    On the other hand, it is fun to speculate:
    * A handwavy explanation about the Thief possessing people rather than imitating them could remove some of the objections above.
    * Alternatively, we could read willfully too much into the Thief changing its "self" as well as its shape.
    * The Art of Murder ending makes more sense if you're the Thief. (The ritual succeeds.)
    * The player recognizes part of the Thief of Face ritual map in Art of Murder, for no clear reason.
    * The player's face can change in Unwell Flint. This follows a draught supposedly similar to cherty griswine... but it doesn't seem so. The Thiefy revelations could be memories.

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    Ian Hart
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    5/11/2016
    I think this is the relevant echo from the story
    http://fallenlondon.storynexus.com/Profile/Antifinity?fromEchoId=7680318
    He doesn't refer to him "by name" there, but it's clear from the Woods In Winter card in the Nadir, and the Triplets certainly do.
    http://fallenlondon.storynexus.com/Profile/Antifinity?fromEchoId=7679842

    There is a lot of speculation out there about him, and I desperately want to know more if anyone has anything.

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    Gilphon
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    5/11/2016
    Perhaps the daughter is the thief-of-faces. It would explain the strange ghost- no such thing actually happened, it's just the thief's excuse to look for the duke- and why she's so willing to reconcile. And it would be a rather tragic and ironic end for the duke.

    Or maybe I've just gotten a little paranoid.

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    Gilphon
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    5/11/2016
    I'm suggesting that the 'reconciliation' is a deception- she kills him soon as the player's stopped paying attention.

    If the player takes the secret, she can't prevent that without breaking her cover- she can't let it be known she was really after that all along. But perhaps the Thief will put another plan into motion, in that case.

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    genesis
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    5/11/2016
    I am unconvinced by the secret ToF identity. Firstly, I don't buy that it or its consequences amount to a "tragic truth". Secondly, what Cash is talking about is something that players missed. What we have been discussing seems to stray more into the realm of speculation.

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    5/11/2016
    Dang, really thought I was on to something.

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    Zero
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    5/11/2016
    Optimatum wrote:
    Beware our beginnings? Were WE the Thief all along!?
    I already read theories about the player character being the Thief-Of-Faces, but I don't exactly remember the details. Can someone enlighten me?

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    5/11/2016
    That doesn't limit us to only one manipulator. Maybe the old man pulled some strings and made sure the player was chosen. Maybe he helped make sure you made it to the neath or would be able to escape New Newgate.
    edited by suinicide on 5/11/2016

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    TheThirdPolice
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    5/11/2016
    All these justifications for the daughter-agent's actions aren't obviously wrong, but they're aren't obviously right either. I could just as easily say the daughter is angry because the protagonist took away her chance for revenge. Occam's Razor suggests this is more likely, since it doesn't require any additional speculation on the value of hiding the secret (then why not have you killed?) or the intimidating profile of the protagonist (in a story with no Dangerous requirement, iirc).
    edited by TheThirdPolice on 5/11/2016

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    Ian Hart
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    5/11/2016
    TheThirdPolice wrote:
    All these justifications for the daughter-agent's actions aren't obviously wrong, but they're aren't obviously right either. I could just as easily say the daughter is angry because the protagonist took away her chance for revenge. Occam's Razor suggests this is more likely, since it doesn't require any additional speculation on the value of hiding the secret (then why not have you killed?) or the intimidating profile of the protagonist (in a story with no Dangerous requirement, iirc).
    edited by TheThirdPolice on 5/11/2016



    I think that if she was not an agent, then yes, she would be angry, and she would confront you. She'd ask why you failed to do the one thing she hired you to do. But if she is an agent she would know why, and she would simply be frustrated that she failed, and return to the surface to inform the Old Man. It's not proof she's a spy, but it does go together well with all the evidence, and it explains a major missing piece of the puzzle (who did the Old Man send to bash open the Duke's head and retrieve the secret?)

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    Optimatum
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    5/12/2016
    In that quest the Idol has to be first awakened by the King with a Hundred Hearts, who makes a reference to Stone. I think it's more specifically connected to the Elder Continent and vitality than the Thief.

    Lilac is definitely heavily involved with the Great Game. Outside of the Feast of the Exceptional Rose, she spends much of her time on the Surface so would almost certainly have contact with the Old Man.

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    TheThirdPolice
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    5/11/2016
    You failed a Google challenge! Persuasive is decreasing...

    Other misc. unhelpful thoughts:

    I doubt that the Strauss was involved in spycraft, so if there is an inspiration for the Old Man it probably has to do with Vienna's 19th century history of spycraft — which I know nothing about.

    I did not realize Woods in Winter was a Longfellow poem. Unless I'm missing something, this is just a thematic connection at most.

    Ooh... someone may have killed the Austrian Crown Prince in the Viennese Woods. It's the exact sort of thing I'd look for as the Duke's 'trial to prove himself', except 1889 is way too late. At best this is the "It happened after", and it's probably not relevant at all.

    Tales from the Vienna Woods was later turned into a play and films. Doesn't seem too relevant though, except, again, thematically.

    Believe it or not I'm actually not including the even less likely finds. :P



    Perhaps more useful to stay within the Fallen London world. It sounds like the Old Man is testing many people (presumably young spies), and perhaps sending them to the Neath to worm their way to the vaults of the Bazaar, or to gather secrets such as the Duke found. Do we have any guesses for other agents of the Old Man (the Clathermonts?), or — since we've been spiralling down this well — evidence that the protagonist is an unwitting agent itself?

    EDIT: As a side note, I'm voting for "the daughter is not an agent." As others have remarked, it requires too much handwaving to justify some of the endings, especially when she lets the player walk away with the secret.
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    James Sinclair
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    5/11/2016
    TheThirdPolice wrote:
    Perhaps more useful to stay within the Fallen London world. It sounds like the Old Man is testing many people (presumably young spies), and perhaps sending them to the Neath to worm their way to the vaults of the Bazaar, or to gather secrets such as the Duke found. Do we have any guesses for other agents of the Old Man (the Clathermonts?), or — since we've been spiralling down this well — evidence that the protagonist is an unwitting agent itself?


    It's quite possible. I think the key connection Cash tweeted about may indeed be the 'Woods in Winter' card found in the Nadir. The text for the different storylets on the card suggest to me that the player was sent/manipulated into travelling to London, at the behest of the Old Man.

    For example, the minor text differences between the two versions of 'The Dance Goes On' storylet on this card (one available if you've reached Entwined in the Intrigues of the Clathermont Family 30, one if you haven't) suggest that a) the woman you're talking to is Millicent Clathermont, a.k.a. The Lady in Lilac, and b) You received some sort of aid from her regarding your Ambition, aid which was subsequently forgotten thanks to Lilac's irrigomancy.

    Furthermore, the Old Man wants, more than anything, to know the secrets of the Bazaar, as seen on the 'Fortune's Page' storylet on the Woods in Winter card. Lilac is privy to some of these secrets, so it makes sense that she is somehow involved with the Old Man.

    So perhaps the Old Man orchestrated the player being sent down to the Neath by manipulating their Ambition, with the player either unaware of it or having forgotten it due to irrigo? This would mean that the player's beginnings might be eerily similar to those of the Duke...

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    xKiv
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    9/29/2016
    Rupho Schartenhauer wrote:
    Uh - this piece of SMEN content I just played seems to be a pretty big, not-very-subtle hint at the identity of the Thief-of-Faces.


    I think that's just talking about Spices. Or Veils, but probably Spices. (who stole mr. eaten's 'principle'? wines and spices!)
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    Ian Hart
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    6/27/2016
    maleclypse wrote:
    Any ideas on the missed detail? I'm trying to decide if I need to replay this a few times after the election ends.



    I haven't seen anything suggesting that we have discovered the "right" answer. I'd definitely replay it if I knew that some confirmation was forthcoming, but as is I think we may have found the missed detail (that the daughter was actually an agent of the Old Man.) Do let us know if you see anything new though.

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    Shadowcthuhlu
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    6/27/2016
    I am also tempted to replay in the future if the daughter actually being an agent is confirmed.

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    Televangelist
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    8/26/2016
    Hello, friends.
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    genesis
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    8/29/2016
    maleclypse wrote:
    Any ideas on the missed detail? I'm trying to decide if I need to replay this a few times after the election ends.


    With all the talk of the Easter egg in the current ES, I wonder if there was something similar here?

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    Optimatum
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    8/30/2016
    I don't think it was ever missed content in the story, just a deduction from content already seen which we had not yet made. Who knows if it was made since then.

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    Catherine Raymond
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    1/28/2016
    Robin Mask wrote:
    Kylestien wrote:
    So, question: what is the third item for the thing later on? I have the blood vial, and the essenses, but I don't think I got anything from this story.

    [spoiler]id reconciling them lock me ot of it? Did I need his secret?[/spoiler]


    Blood-soaked handkerchief . . . should be in your inventory with the others smile

    (Am I the only one with Griswine left?) XD


    No, indeed, I still have my cup of Griswine. I am wondering how one gets to use it.

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    Toran
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    1/28/2016
    A truly lovely exceptional story. I found myself hard-pressed to make a choice at the end and am glad of the one I chose, though there were other tempting options. I regret my choice for last month's story, but I think it's fascinating that making moral choices in the neath is often inscrutably difficult.

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    Rackenhammer
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    1/28/2016
    A truly good story, gents!

    I'm a little curious, though, as to why there seem to be options about halfway through the story to end them early. Does anyone actually ever take those? They seem put in only as an option to not get your money's worth.

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    Catherine Raymond
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    1/28/2016
    Curious Foreigner wrote:
    Thinking about it, I find the ending I got hilarious.
    [spoiler]So the daughter comes all the way from Vienna to take revenge on her father, and what does she take from him? Eyes he can't use, a secret he went to great lengths to forget, and a life that won't stay gone for long. And all because my character found it funnier not to tell her how Death (not) works in the Neath...[/spoiler]
    Catherine Raymond wrote:
    No, indeed, I still have my cup of Griswine. I am wondering how one gets to use it.

    While you can't use it in the game right now, it would be very handy if you ever need to poison someone in a non-lethal and easily reversible, but potentially permanent manner.
    edited by Curious Foreigner on 1/28/2016


    A good idea; I wonder if FBG will make that option available at some point.

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    Optimatum
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    1/29/2016
    MidnightVoyager wrote:
    http://fallenlondon.storynexus.com/Profile/Gemma~Hawley

    Well, I found the ending nobody's taken yet, but they haven't said anything about the reward. For the lore-fiends out there.

    What's the reward for that ending?

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    Kylestien
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    1/28/2016
    Okay so I have a bug now:

    [spoiler]]I picked the try and get her to dance with him option and the talk to her to reconciliate, but I hit try again rather then onwards and now my ONLY options are stab or prevent. I can't go back to talk to him, I can't pick the option again. I'm stuck ubale to reconcilate the two[/spoiler]

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    Mr Sables
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    1/28/2016
    wraith wrote:
    what have you chosen robin?



    [spoiler] I chose to reconcile, as it felt the better of the two [/spoiler]

    It took a bit more work than the other option, but I found it worth it, at least in terms of rewards.

    I just felt the ending for it fell . . . flat. The story until that point was amazing, but I disliked the inability to choose to save him without reconciling them, and wasn't too keen on the lack of detail and hasty resolution . . . I'd still rate this story very highly, though, as I loved almost all of it smile I just wish that final 5% matched the other 95% smile
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    1/28/2016
    Blame it on the Bossa Nova. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7XpWOBEZLEs

    -- Mal

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    Mr Sables
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    1/28/2016
    I was so happy to see this!

    I'm enjoying the story so far; it's one that probably doesn't appeal too much to me in terms of genre, but it is wonderfully written with so much insight into some NPCs and FL lore, which is making it a lot of fun to play smile Strangely, I'm at a point where I'm given a seemingly innocuous choice, but there's something so ominous about it . . . I'm really feeling for the characters, who are fleshed out so well, and I think it's adding a lot of emotional impact and tension to the choices made.

    Can't wait to see where it all leads! smile
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    Catherine Raymond
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    1/28/2016
    Wilhelm the Stalwart wrote:
    The conclusion in which you take the secret is echoed on my profile and the secret itself is displayed as my mantelpiece.

    On a separate note can you use the items gained from the Flint arc yet, or will that come later?
    edited by Wilhelm the Stalwart on 1/28/2016


    Interesting. Thank you. Though I find your decision interesting in light of the content of the "They say" quote on your profile.

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    Mr. Mercutio
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    1/28/2016
    Here's a permalink to what happens when you steal the secret for yourself, with my alt Galatea:

    http://fallenlondon.storynexus.com/Profile/Galatea~LaChance?fromEchoId=7678488

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    The Vengeful Huntsman
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    1/28/2016
    Catherine Raymond wrote:

    Interesting. Thank you. Though I find your decision interesting in light of the content of the "They say" quote on your profile.



    Wilhelm came to the neath to avenge a murder, and in the course of pursuing his vengeance he's done terrible things.
    The last line in completion is "He who fights monsters should look to it that he himself does not become a monster."
    This is doubly appropriate in that he is a Monster Hunter.
    He was once a good man but all that remains of him is a thirst for vengeance and a hunger for secrets that could help him achieve it.

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    Shadowcthuhlu
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    1/28/2016
    My character also has nemesis, but I encourage reconciliation because my spouse hates the Thief and my character does not wish to sleep on sofa tonight

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    Shadowcthuhlu
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    1/28/2016
    Mr. Mercutio wrote:
    Here's a permalink to what happens when you steal the secret for yourself, with my alt Galatea:

    http://fallenlondon.storynexus.com/Profile/Galatea~LaChance?fromEchoId=7678488


    Thank you!

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    Optimatum
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    1/29/2016
    metasynthie wrote:
    Well, that's exactly why I was making that supposition, really.



  • I didn't get the impression of similarity between the two; given a couple lines and His Amused Lordship's bet, The Boatman came more to mind for me.

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    fortluna
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    1/29/2016
    Optimatum wrote:
    metasynthie wrote:
    As for the Old Man, isn't he... <spoiler here>


    I don't think so.


    [spoiler]Yeah! I was really quite excited about this story just because I remembered sunless sea Vienna - you get an Enigma if you go back up to meet your friend with the Name. There were two similar sets of memories in Frostfound, after all. [/spoiler]

  • yikes, why don't these spoilers work
    edited by fortluna on 1/29/2016
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    merusdraconis
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    1/30/2016
    I was particularly intrigued by the snippets we heard regarding the Surface - far as I'm aware, this is the first we've heard of the Surface in terms of how Europe reacted to London's removal. Honestly, though, it's a little strange. [spoiler]WW1 didn't manage to tear Europe apart, and they had, for the first time, much more devastating weapons. London being separated from England would have been a massive blow, but England still has its shipyards and its Empire, which barely needs London to function as it is. While it's not invading France any time soon, it's still a player, which is, I assume, why the Great Game is still played in London. If Europe is ravaged by the Great Game blowing up in Bismarck's face, and America didn't excitedly see Europe tearing itself apart and swoop in to claim territory (it might be a bit early for that, but then if Europe's ripe for the plucking...) what the hell is going on up there?[/spoiler]

    Personally I assume that someone smuggled a correspondence-marked crate of Cider up. That feels like it'd incite the kind of wars talked about.
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    metasynthie
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    1/31/2016
    It's one of the potential rewards from paying the Regiment to steal something out of Mr Sacks' sack for you -- an option which is still available (but costs Fate). If you're curious what that fragment says, it's been echoed:
    http://fallenlondon.storynexus.com/Profile/Black~Tom?fromEchoId=7284069

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    PageofCups
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    1/31/2016
    It'll be awesome if whatever comes in the extra story ties into our previous choices. All of my main's actions were aimed against the thief, would be nice if that translated to some consequences.

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    The Duke of Waltham
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    2/3/2016
    Lomias wrote:
    The daughter and the father came out of nowhere and we probably won't see them again (and their profile pics are, er, no offence, a bit ugly).

    Hey! She's holding on pretty well for a sixty-five-year-old Austrian... pauper? Probably not, but it is true that we know next to nothing about this woman. We've come to know the Waltzing Duke fairly well, but the Resolute Aesthete is a cipher; even the fact that we refer to her as an aesthete has no obvious justification other than her appreciation of a particular piece of music—and popular music, at that. I suppose that bothers me a little. Still, not knowing more than the barest of outlines about her life does make some sense in the context of the story, and it might even be besides the point. It is the Duke and his actions that form the heart of the story, and death in the hands of his daughter is merely one of the choices we have in responding to what we have learned about him. For some it would be poetic justice; for others, a family tragedy we have no business preventing, having already played our assigned part in this affair. Either way, her part is secondary. The focus is not on whether we want to see the Aesthete kill her father, but on whether we want to see him die by her blade.

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    2/3/2016
    The Duke of Waltham wrote:

    Hey! She's holding on pretty well for a sixty-five-year-old Austrian... pauper? Probably not, but it is true that we know next to nothing about this woman. We've come to know the Waltzing Duke fairly well, but the Resolute Aesthete is a cipher; even the fact that we refer to her as an aesthete has no obvious justification other than her appreciation of a particular piece of music—and popular music, at that. I suppose that bothers me a little. Still, not knowing more than the barest of outlines about her life does make some sense in the context of the story, and it might even be besides the point. It is the Duke and his actions that form the heart of the story, and death in the hands of his daughter is merely one of the choices we have in responding to what we have learned about him. For some it would be poetic justice; for others, a family tragedy we have no business preventing, having already played our assigned part in this affair. Either way, her part is secondary. The focus is not on whether we want to see the Aesthete kill her father, but on whether we want to see him die by her blade.


    True, but things could be more interesting if Resolute Aesthete is an old friend of ours, that's what I meant by connection.
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    Mordaine Barimen
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    2/2/2016
    I was comparing new lore revealed near the end of Flint to that in Waltz.

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    Trodgmey
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    Posts: 164

    2/10/2016
    I'm behind on my lore, but the name that jumped to mind for the Old Man was

    [spoiler]
    Feducci?

    "Old Man" is not a bad rough translation of "Presbyter."
    [/spoiler]

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    2/20/2016
    MrBurnside wrote:
    When arriving in the Neath, he was kind, generous and law abiding. He just ripped open someone's skull for blackmail material.


    As I see it, Fallen London is a city where we all have our own fairy tales, you have yours, the duke had his, and I have mine. I am partial to the ones featuring blood, snow, and burning poisons, but to each their own. It may seem from the outside that we are not bound by any rules of behaviour, but it is not so: every fairy tale is its own cage, and its rules are even more unbreakable than natural laws. The worst crime, I think, would be to interfere.

    Excellent choice in Gene Wolfe, Mr Burnside. I've been getting Angela Carter. Yours sincerely, signed with my name, Dubinee Finnat (do you see?) smile
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    2/25/2016
    Passionario wrote:
    OK, I'm freaking out a bit here.

    See, Passionario is an avid player of the Great Game (and was one before he descended to the Neath), an enthusiastic fan of Sinning Jenny, a regular visitor at Clathermont's and an old acquaintance of his Amused Lordship. He also spent an entire year in the Cave of the Nadir once (because I took a break from the game and logged off there).

    A few days ago, I created a character who is meant to represent his daughter, descending into the Neath to find him.

    Then, just this morning, I changed his destiny to the one in which he ends up essentially sightless.

    And now that I've met the Waltzing Duke, I know exactly what a Dread Surmise feels like.

    ...

    It's me. It was me all along. And now it's too late.

    While I was reading this, a certain song came to mind. It doesn't fit perfectly by any stretch of the imagination, but there are some similarities.
    [spoiler] ♫ There was a girl I used to know
    She dealt my love a savage blow
    I was so young, too blind to see
    But anyway that's history

    'History never repeats'
    I tell myself, before I go to sleep


    (or a bit later in the song...)

    Deep in the night, it's all so clear
    I lie awake with great ideas
    Lurking about in no-man's land
    I think at last I understand

    'History never repeats'
    I tell myself, before I go to sleep
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    Edit: turns out if you double-spoilertag (rather than including a / to close the spoiler tag), you can hide your own forum signature. :-p
    edited by Kittenpox on 2/25/2016

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    Kittenpox
    Current [Fabulous Diamond] count: Twenty-Five (of 50). Halfway there! ^_^
    Metaphysical Caprice: 11.
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    Currently: Returned to the Neath, and regaining my footing in this place. :-)
    NO PLANT BATTLES PLEASE.
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    Mordaine Barimen
    Mordaine Barimen
    Posts: 670

    2/25/2016
    I know I've seen an echo of allowing her the pleasure of the deed, although it's not what I chose, so I cannot help directly.

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    I'm sorry, but due to policy clarifications, I will no longer be giving detailed mechanics advice on the forums.

    If you still need help, try the IRC channel.
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